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Post by Jon28 Sat Jan 26, 2008 4:44 pm

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Fragile, floating hexagons,
a white sea of wish flowers
blown by God's breath.

I single out a flake
and am chilled

by

the

drift

of

its

descent-

cartwheeling, carefree.... one with its Source.

In humanity's ocean
each droplet is unique,
yet connected-

waves of flesh and blood,
warm saline souls-
salt shaken by the Maker.

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Post by Sarveswara Sun Jan 27, 2008 2:16 am

Ahhh my master of poetry, Jon, you get my juices for poetry flowing, and I drool at your expertise of annalogy and intriquite deepth of meanings within your words. It so makes me want to put pen to paper myself and allow the divne to flow through me as it is you.

The way you float the words down, to reprent the snow fake itself as it falls from the sky, so clever.

I felt the connection to you, to all, to life as a whole, as I read this poem. I saw that drop of water you were merging with the drop of water that I am, and we then merged with the rest of the wave, and the wave merged into the Ocen of Divine Bliss as we became whole, we became ONE. hug
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Post by Jon28 Sun Jan 27, 2008 2:52 am

flowers Thank you, dear. And, as you say, "Thank God," for it is true; He illumines the page through this little dream of His. Namaste my dearest sister........
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Post by Light Mystic Mon Jan 28, 2008 11:17 pm

Wow, great poem. I love that. Thank you for posting it.

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